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Above the World
Lee Shu Hui
Pencil sketch
2010
About the Artwork
(the
following art critique I did in 2010 was for our AEP SIA. We chose the
theme Light, so I'm talking about how this work relates to our theme
towards the end)
This artwork depicts a man standing on a narrow
rectangular pipe, which could be stretching from one building to
another. Below him, there are many buildings of different shapes and
sizes, which show a cityscape. The people walking on ground level appear
to be small dots. A linear perspective has been used so that the
buildings appear large at the top and small towards the ground. The
light source is coming from the top left corner of the picture, showing
that the sun is beginning to set.
Contrast has been
created through the differing intensities of light and shadows. Shadows
have been made extra dark by using a 6B pencil, while the actual drawing
was done using HB and 2B pencils, causing the pencil marks to appear
much lighter. There is some sense of movement in the artwork, as from
the direction in which the man's hair is blowing, one can observe that
there is a breeze blowing from the viewer's right. Large rectangles, the
tops of the buildings, have been placed around the man, to allow for
eye movement around the artwork. Composition is rather balanced, as
subject matter is not concentrated on any spot, but is evenly spread
out. Emphasis has been placed toward the centre of the picture, where
the man is. Beside the man, the side of the building not facing the sun
has been made specifically darker, to draw the viewer's attention to the
man.
This artwork is somewhat similar to Friedrich's
Wanderer Above the Mists, although urbanized. The man stands alone,
above a cityscape, looking down below at the happenings of busy city
life. However, there is a sense of stillness in the picture, as there is
little sense of movement but for the slight breeze, which shows the
serenity the man is experiencing alone high up above the ground. This
brings across a peaceful mood. Through this artwork the artist might be
trying to portray that the man is fleeing from the troubles of a hectic
life, and goes up to a quiet high place as a form of escapism. The dark
shadows which spread across the artwork could mean that the darkness is
threatening to overpower those on the ground level, who are still
engaged in the bustle of a hectic life. Through this, the artist might
be trying to say that having too busy a life would not be good for
people, and that sometimes all we need to do is step back for a
breather. This artwork could also show the serenity of being alone at
times, bringing across a light peaceful feeling, and also shows striking
contrast between shadows and light, hence connects suitably to the
theme "Light".
How I Did It
This is a pencil sketch through and through. I loved the urban feel of it, the way it's monochromatic and sketchy.
Why I Did It
This was actually based on a drawing I did in Pri 5, 2007. I admired the earnestness of the subject matter, of the pencil strokes in the drawing, so I decided to do a "reproduction" of the drawing. Originally the man was standing above a highway, but I decided that would be too unrealistic, so I changed it to a metropolis. When I drew that in 2007, I was very honestly trying to depict a place where one could be free to take a moment in the cool breeze, high above the ground, alone, to think, to see, to ponder, to be calm, to be at peace. Thus, I incorporated the same main subject matter, but changed the background.